If I Could ......

موضوع: If I Could ...... الأحد سبتمبر 28, 2008 2:48 pm

If I could catch a rainbow
I would do it just for you
And share with you its beauty
The days you're feeling blue

If I could build a mountain
You could call it your very own
A place to find serenity
A place to be alone

If I could take your troubles
I would toss them in the sea
But all these things I'm finding
Are impossible for me

I cannot build you a mountain
Or catch you a rainbow fair
But let me be what I do best
A friend that's always .... will be there

I wrote this short poem two years ago

And I wanted to share it with you to take your opinions

Is it really good ??? .....

Greetings Full Of Love

موضوع: رد: If I Could ...... الإثنين سبتمبر 29, 2008 8:12 am

I cannot build you a mountain
Or catch you a rainbow fair
But let me be what I do best
A friend that's always .... will be there

بجد بجد بجد هايييييييييييييييييييييييييل

انا طبعا في حاجات كتير كانت محتاجة ترجمة

بس بجد المعني وصلني

ودايما يارب الاقي الاصدقاء جنبي

وميرسي يا احلي صاحبة ليا

موضوع: رد: If I Could ...... الخميس أكتوبر 02, 2008 4:12 am

If I could take your troubles
I would toss them in the sea
But all these things I'm finding
Are impossible for me

I cannot build you a mountain
Or catch you a rainbow fair
But let me be what I do best
A friend that's always .... will be there

wooooooooooooow Rudy
really, it`s very goooooooooooood